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Exercise: Eliminating Wordiness and Passive Voice Revise these sentences to state their meaning in fewer words. Avoid passive voice, needless repetition, and wordy phrases and clauses. 1-The bicycle was damaged, and it was hard to repair. 2-Although Bradley Hall is regularly populated by students, close study of the building as a structure is seldom undertaken by them. 3-When she started college, she had high hopes her specific educational needs would be met by her chosen discipline’s faculty. 4-It is expected that the new schedule will be announced by the bus company within the next few days. 5-Trouble is caused when people disobey rules that have been established for the safety of all. 6-A campus rally was attended by more than a thousand students. Five students were arrested by campus police for disorderly conduct, while several others are charged by campus administrators with organizing a public meeting without being issued a permit to do so. 7-The house’s bricks were painted over with gray and terra cotta. 8-The subjects that are considered most important by students are those that have been shown to be useful to them after graduation. 9-In the not-too-distant future, college freshmen must all become aware of the fact that there is a need for them to make contact with an academic adviser concerning the matter of a major. 10-Love is a relative term and can only be correctly defined by the one professing it.

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